When a Fool is Born
As I shook the night,my mind took flightmy worries burrowed under my skin.Headlight burnt fog,the bridge, the dead dog.A titanium heart turning to tin.I swerved just in time to miss the truck,his horn...
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Writing in purple suits you, very well executed lines, nice images..well not so nice as wow! Through the windshield...that does hurt. A well told story as well...OM~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's...
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Thanks Jesse! I think my red pen's runnin' low!Just between us...I think it's time for us to recognize, the differences we fear to show...Just between us...I think it's time for us to realize...the...
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Magnificent imagery, my head feels bloodied from your powerful verses!
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..fun read, very well crafted. i liked this one muchly. kudos!Pereant, inquit, qui ante nos nostra dixerant.All things considered, insanity seems to be the best alternative.
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Quite a journey to follow, and well-written! You have a real knack for storytelling.Sincerely,miles
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